Meet Chise, a young girl who is reborn in a new world with her old memories lost. A goddess grants her the gift of ‘Creation Magic’ under one condition – that she enjoys her new life! Together with Teto, a golem she creates, Chise embarks on an enchanting journey across the world.

This comic book presents an intriguing premise but struggles with execution. At the same time this comic book combines elements of fantasy and slice-of-life, offering potential that is not fully realized.

The story in this comic book follows a witch who discovers a loophole allowing her to access infinite magical power. This concept is promising, opening the door to creative storytelling and humorous scenarios. However, the narrative lacks depth and focus, often relying on repetitive plot points that fail to engage me personally fully.

The character development is one of this comic book’s significant weaknesses. The protagonist, while initially interesting, lacks depth and complexity. Her motivations and personality are underexplored, making it difficult for readers to connect with her journey. The supporting characters, introduced with little backstory or development, serve primarily as foils or comedic relief, rather than adding meaningful layers to the narrative.

The writing style in this comic book introduces a world filled with magical possibilities, but the execution is uneven. The dialogue often feels forced and lacks the wit and charm needed to elevate the story. Conversations serve more as exposition than genuine interactions, which detracts from the potential for dynamic character exchanges.

The artwork is a redeeming aspect of this comic book. The illustrations capture the whimsical nature of the magical world with vibrant designs and expressive characters. The visual style adds an element of charm, enhancing the lighthearted tone of the story. However, even strong artwork cannot fully compensate for the narrative shortcomings.

The pacing of this comic book is very inconsistent, with scenes that either drag without adding value or rush through potentially significant moments. This inconsistency disrupts the flow of the story, making it challenging for me personally to maintain interest or fully grasp the plot’s progression.

Despite its weaknesses, this comic book’s concept holds potential for future development. With a stronger narrative structure and deeper exploration of character motivations, subsequent installments could better capture the whimsy and creativity inherent in the premise.

I Give This Book 2 / 5