“Sonora Pass” By Jaime Olmos & Kevin Nichols Review

The protagonists are college friends and former members of JABBERWOCKY, a rock/latin fusion band. After 25 years, the band holds a reunion in Montreal for their friends and fans. Following a wildly successful reunion party, Celia the female singer is found dead. Jonah, the band’s sax player sets out to investigate the cause for Celia’s untimely death. The story involves several flashbacks to the 1970s relating to Celia’s relationships and to her troubled past in revolutionary Central America.

This comic book is an adventurous graphic novel set against the rugged beauty of the Sierra Nevada. With a premise rooted in exploration and personal discovery, the story aims to evoke a sense of wilderness and introspection. However, despite its promising concept and striking artwork, the execution falls flat.

From the outset, this comic book tries to take us as readers into the high-altitude landscape, with detailed and atmospheric illustrations that capture the grandeur of the mountains.

The artwork itself in this comic book is undeniably talented, offering lush vistas and expressive character designs that breathe life into the story’s setting. The visual elements are perhaps the strongest aspect of the book, immersing me personally in the natural beauty of the pass and the wilderness that encircles it.

Unfortunately, the narrative suffers from significant issues that hinder its overall impact. The writing itself in this comic book, while descriptive, is often bogged down by pacing problems and underdeveloped characters. The plot revolves around a protagonist (whose motivations are vague) that embarks on a trek through Sonora Pass, ostensibly to confront personal demons or find meaning. However, the story spends too much time on meandering scenes and exposition, leaving little room for meaningful character development or plot progression.

One of the most glaring shortcomings is the lack of emotional depth. The protagonist’s internal struggle is hinted at but never fully explored, making it difficult for me personally to connect or care about their journey. The dialogue often feels stilted and superficial, further distancing the reader from the characters’ inner lives. As a result, the narrative feels hollow, and the sense of adventure is overshadowed by a lack of engagement.

Additionally, the story’s pacing is inconsistent. Some sections drag on without purpose, while others rush through key moments, leaving important themes and character arcs underdeveloped. This comic book’s attempt to evoke a contemplative mood is undermined by these pacing issues, making the reading experience feel uneven and somewhat frustrating.

Despite these flaws, this comic book does have its moments of visual brilliance. The artwork’s detailed landscapes and dynamic compositions are commendable and often breathtaking. These visuals elevate certain scenes, providing a sense of scale and awe that effectively captures the majesty of the mountains. For art enthusiasts, this aspect alone may justify a glance at the book, though it cannot compensate for the storytelling shortcomings.

I Give This Book 2 / 5

“Faith, Hope and Marriage Vol. 1” By Megumu Minami & Emma Goldrick Review

Faith decided to work as a manager at Rose Cottage, a seaside villa. However, Lady Sunny, the villa owner, only wants to talk about the wonders of marriage and doesn’t explain the job to her. Faith is not interested in marriage at all and is very suspicious of Harry, the man of the house… He keeps trying to interfere with Faith’s work. Why does the extremely attractive Harry suddenly find himself worrying about her?

This comic book sets out to explore themes of love and commitment but ultimately falls short. Despite the potential this comic book has, this comic book struggles with character depth and narrative engagement.

The story in this comic book centers on the complexities of relationships and the challenges of balancing personal desires with the expectations of marriage. This setup offers rich possibilities for emotional depth and exploration. However, the execution lacks the nuance needed to fully engage me personally, resulting in a narrative that feels predictable and formulaic.

The character development in this comic book is a significant area where this comic book falters in my opinion. The protagonist, while initially intriguing, lacks depth and complexity. Her motivations and inner conflicts are not thoroughly explored, making it difficult for me personally to connect with her journey on a meaningful level. Similarly, the male lead is portrayed as a typical romantic archetype, without the uniqueness or depth needed to captivate.

The dialogues throughout this comic book is straightforward but often lacks the emotional resonance necessary to elevate the narrative. Conversations between characters feel forced and uninspired, missing opportunities to delve into meaningful exchanges that could enrich the story. This results in a monotonous reading experience, with few moments that stand out or leave a lasting impression.

The artwork itself in this comic book, while visually appealing, does little to enhance the storytelling. The illustrations are clean and expressive, capturing the characters’ emotions adequately. However, the artwork lacks the dynamic energy required to bring the story to life. Backgrounds are often minimal, and the character designs, while attractive, do not compensate for the lack of detail that could add depth to the narrative.

The use of shading and composition in the artwork is adequate but lacks innovation, failing to create a vibrant atmosphere that aligns with the romantic themes of the story. A more dynamic visual approach could have added layers to the narrative, drawing readers into the world and enhancing the emotional resonance.

The pacing of this comic book is another challenge which this comic book has to face, as the story moves predictably through key plot points without allowing sufficient time for development or reflection. This rapid progression makes it difficult for me personally to become invested in the characters’ journeys or the stakes of the narrative.

Despite these shortcomings, the concept behind this comic book remains promising. With a focus on romance, personal growth, and the complexities of relationships, it has the potential to be an engaging series.

I Give This Book 2 / 5

“The Magnate’s Baby Promise Vol. 1” By Satoru Nagasawa & Paula Roe Review

Ava is struggling to solve two major problems when billionaire Cal, a man she had a passionate one-night stand with, appears before her. He does not seem happy about their reunion and announces flatly that if she can prove that the baby she’s carrying is his, he’ll marry her and give her the money to save her failing hotel from bankruptcy. Cal is a cold man who assumes that she got close to him for his money and is using the promise of an heir to reel him in. But even if he insults her memories of that night, all he can do is hold to his conditions. What will happen to Ava if she chooses to go through with a loveless marriage?

This comic book presents a narrative rich with possibilities for drama and romance, yet it falls short in execution. This comic book has a intriguing premise which this comic book didn’t use, this comic book struggles with character development and narrative depth.

The story in this comic book follows a wealthy magnate entangled in a complex relationship, centered around promises and the responsibilities of parenthood. While the setup offers opportunities to explore themes of love, trust, and family dynamics, the execution lacks the nuance needed to fully engage me personally The narrative adheres too closely to predictable tropes, offering few surprises or fresh insights.

The character development in this comic book is one of the major areas where this comic book falters in my opinion. The protagonist, while initially intriguing, remains underdeveloped. Her motivations and emotional struggles are only superficially addressed, making it difficult for me personally to connect with her journey. Similarly, the male lead is portrayed as a stereotypical romantic interest, lacking the complexity or depth needed to truly captivate.

The dialogues throughout this comic book is straightforward but often lacks the emotional weight necessary to elevate the narrative. Conversations between characters feel formulaic, missing opportunities to delve into meaningful exchanges that could enrich the story. This results in a monotonous reading experience, with few memorable moments or engaging interactions.

The artwork itself in this comic book, while visually appealing, does little to enhance the storytelling. The illustrations are clean and expressive, capturing the characters’ emotions adequately. However, the artwork lacks the dynamic energy required to bring the story to life. Backgrounds are often minimal, and the character designs, though attractive, do not compensate for the lack of detail that could add depth to the narrative.

The use of shading and composition in the artwork is adequate but lacks innovation, failing to create a vibrant atmosphere that aligns with the romantic themes of the story. A more dynamic visual approach could have added layers to the narrative, which had drawn me personally into the world and enhancing the emotional resonance.

The pacing of this comic book is another challenge, as the story moves predictably through key plot points without allowing sufficient time for development or reflection. This rapid progression makes it difficult for me personally to become invested in the characters’ journeys or the stakes of the narrative.

Despite these shortcomings, the concept behind this comic book remains promising. With a focus on romance, personal growth, and familial responsibilities, it has the potential to be an engaging series.

I Give This Book 2 / 5

“One Night to Risk It All Vol. 1” By Masami Shinohara & Maisey Yates Review

Rachel Holt has lived her life in the service of her family, taking care to live up to her father’s standards. Her fiancé, Ajax, is an earnest man who learned business management from her father. And after they marry, he’s slated to take over the family business. Despite it being a loveless marriage, Rachel has no reason to object. That is…until she meets Alex on the island where she is spending her last days as a single woman. They fall for each other instantly and spend a passionate night together. But the following morning, she makes a shocking discovery. Alex’s motive is to seek revenge against Ajax!

This comic book sets out to deliver a tale of passion and intrigue but ultimately falls short. Despite the potential this comic book, this comic book struggles with pacing and character development, preventing it from fully resonating with me personally.

This comic book revolves around a high-stakes romance, where the protagonist is caught in a whirlwind of emotions and decisions. While the premise offers potential for drama and depth, the execution lacks the nuance needed to engage me personally. The narrative unfolds predictably, adhering too closely to familiar tropes without introducing fresh twists or insights.

The character development in this comic book is one of the primary areas where this comic book falters in my opinion. The protagonist, though initially intriguing, remains underdeveloped throughout the story. Her motivations and internal conflicts are not explored in sufficient detail, making it difficult for me personally to connect with her journey. Similarly, the male lead comes across as a typical romantic archetype, lacking the complexity or charm necessary to captivate.

The dialogues throughout this comic book is straightforward but often lacks the emotional weight required to elevate the narrative. Conversations between characters feel formulaic, missing opportunities to delve into meaningful exchanges that could enrich the story. This results in a reading experience that feels flat, with few memorable moments or engaging interactions.

The artwork itself in this comic book, while visually appealing, does little to enhance the storytelling. The illustrations are clean and expressive, capturing the characters’ emotions adequately. However, the artwork lacks the dynamic energy required to bring the story to life. Backgrounds are often minimal, and the character designs, while attractive, do not compensate for the lack of detail that could add depth to the narrative.

The use of shading and composition in the artwork is adequate but lacks innovation, failing to create a vibrant atmosphere that aligns with the romantic themes of the story. A more dynamic visual approach could have added layers to the narrative, which had drawn me personally into the world and enhancing the emotional resonance.

The pacing of this comic book is another challenge for this comic book, as the story moves predictably through key plot points without allowing sufficient time for development or reflection. This rapid progression makes it difficult for me personally to become invested in the characters’ journeys or the stakes of the narrative.

Despite these shortcomings, the concept behind this comic book remains promising. With a focus on romance, personal growth, and high-stakes decisions, it has the potential to be an engaging series. Future comic books in this series would benefit from more complex character development, a deeper exploration of themes, and a more engaging narrative structure.

I Give This Book 2 / 5

“A Professional Engagement Vol. 1” By Yu Mahara & Darcy Maguire Review

Tara operates a bridal business in Sydney with her mother and two sisters. Her job is to help clients come up with perfect wedding proposals and to arrange beautiful weddings. One day, Patrick, a successful young businessman, comes to her with a request. Tara is suspicious of getting a request from a handsome millionaire who shouldn’t need help in the romance department. But after some consideration, she accepts, thinking the job may be a good PR opportunity if all goes well. Her plan is to calmly and efficiently complete the job as a professional—that is until he shakes her resolve with his glittering green eyes and dashing good looks.

This comic book tries to create a compelling romantic narrative set in a professional backdrop but ultimately falls short. Despite the potential this comic book has for drama and emotional depth, this comic book struggles with pacing and character development.

The story in this comic book centers on a woman’s journey through a high-stakes professional world, intertwined with the complexities of a budding romance. This setup offers ample opportunity to explore themes of ambition, love, and personal growth. However, the execution lacks the nuance and emotional resonance needed to fully engage me personally.

Then character development is one of the primary areas where this comic book falters in my opinion. The protagonist, while initially intriguing, remains underdeveloped. Her motivations and inner conflicts are only superficially addressed, making it difficult for me personally to connect with her journey. Similarly, the male lead lacks depth, often coming across as a stereotypical romantic interest without the complexity needed to captivate.

Dialogue throughout this comic book is straightforward but lacks the emotional weight necessary to elevate the narrative. Conversations between characters often feel formulaic, missing opportunities for meaningful exchanges that could enrich the story. This results in a reading experience that feels flat, with few memorable moments or engaging interactions.

The artwork itself in this comic book, while visually appealing, does little to enhance the storytelling. The illustrations are clean and expressive, capturing the characters’ emotions adequately. However, the artwork lacks the dynamic energy required to bring the story to life. Backgrounds are minimal, and the character designs, while attractive, do not compensate for the lack of detail that could add depth to the narrative.

The use of shading and composition in the artwork is adequate but lacks innovation, failing to create a vibrant atmosphere that aligns with the romantic themes of the story. A more dynamic visual approach could have added layers to the narrative, which had drawn me personally into the world and enhancing the emotional resonance.

The pacing of this comic book is another challenge for this comic book, as the story moves predictably through key plot points without allowing sufficient time for development or reflection. This rapid progression makes it difficult for me personally to become invested in the characters’ journeys or the stakes of the narrative.

Despite these shortcomings, the concept behind this comic book holds promise. With a focus on romance, professional challenges, and personal growth, it has the potential to be an engaging series.

I Give This Book 2 / 5

“The Final Seduction Vol. 1” By Natsumi Matsumoto & Sharon Kendrick Review

Accused of being unfaithful by her fiancé, Drew, heartbroken Shelly fled to Milan. Three years later, she’s back in the town she never thought she’d return to. There, she runs into Drew, and with their unresolved past looming over them, their fighting begins again. His blue eyes, deep as the ocean, no longer hold the warmth for her that they once did… But before she knows it, she is relying on him once more, just like before.

This comic book tries to weave a tale of passion and intrigue but ultimately falls short. Despite the potential this comic book has for drama and romance, this comic book struggles with pacing and depth, leaving much to be desired.

The story in this comic book follows a young woman entangled in a complex relationship with a charismatic yet mysterious man. While the premise offers ample opportunity for exploring themes of love, desire, and personal growth, the execution lacks the nuance and emotional resonance needed to engage me personally fully.

The character development is a the main area of concern for this comic book in my opinion. The protagonist, although initially intriguing, remains underdeveloped throughout this comic book. Her motivations and inner conflicts are superficially addressed, making it difficult for me personally to form a strong connection with her journey. Similarly, the male lead is portrayed with a lack of depth, often coming across as a stereotypical romantic interest without the complexity or charm needed to captivate.

The dialogues throughout this comic book is straightforward but often lacks the emotional weight necessary to elevate the narrative. Conversations between characters feel formulaic, missing opportunities to delve into meaningful exchanges that could enhance the story. This results in a monotonous reading experience, with few moments that stand out or leave a lasting impression.

The artwork itself in this comic book, while visually appealing, does little to enhance the storytelling. The illustrations are clean and expressive, capturing the characters’ emotions adequately. However, the artwork lacks the dynamic energy needed to bring the story to life. Backgrounds are often minimal, and the character designs, while attractive, do not compensate for the lack of detail that could add depth to the narrative.

The use of shading and composition in the artwork is adequate but lacks innovation, failing to create a vibrant atmosphere that aligns with the romantic themes of the story. A more dynamic visual approach could have added layers to the narrative, drawing readers into the world and enhancing the emotional resonance.

The pacing of this comic book is another challenge, as the story moves predictably through key plot points without allowing sufficient time for development or reflection. This rapid progression makes it difficult for me personally to become invested in the characters’ journeys or the stakes of the narrative.

Despite these shortcomings, the concept behind this comic book remains promising. With a focus on romance, personal growth, and overcoming challenges, it has the potential to be an engaging series.

I Give This Book 2 / 5

“Husband Material Vol. 1” By Megumu Minami & Emma Goldrick Review

Since her husband’s death, Rose has been living quietly in a small town. One day the handsome lawyer Sam Horton appears in her neighborhood and disrupts her peaceful life. Even though he treats her like a child and pesters her, Rose can’t help but be drawn to him and his daughter. Still, haunted by her past marriage, she tries to push Sam away.

This comic book tries to deliver a charming romantic tale but falls short of expectations. Despite the potential this comic book had for engaging storytelling and character development, this comic book struggles with predictability and a lack of depth.

The story in this comic book follows a young woman navigating the complexities of love and relationships, set against the backdrop of societal expectations and personal aspirations. While the premise holds promise in this comic book, offering opportunities for both humor and heartfelt moments, the execution lacks the nuance needed to fully engage me personally.

The character development is one of the primary areas where this comic book falters in my opinion. The protagonist, though relatable in her quest for love, does not evolve significantly throughout the story. Her motivations and inner conflicts are superficially addressed, making it challenging for me personally to connect with her journey on a deeper level. Similarly, the male lead lacks complexity, often fitting into the archetype of a romantic interest without much individuality.

The dialogues throughout this comic book is straightforward but lacks the emotional depth necessary to enrich the narrative. Conversations between characters often feel formulaic, missing opportunities to explore meaningful exchanges that could enhance the story’s impact. This results in a reading experience that feels flat, with few memorable moments or engaging interactions.

The artwork itself in this comic book, while visually appealing, does little to elevate the storytelling. The illustrations are clean and expressive, capturing the characters’ emotions adequately. However, the artwork lacks the dynamic energy needed to bring the story to life. Backgrounds are often minimal, and the character designs, while attractive, do not compensate for the lack of detail that could add depth to the narrative.

The use of shading and composition in the artwork is adequate but lacks innovation, failing to create a vibrant atmosphere that aligns with the romantic themes of the story. A more dynamic visual approach could have added layers to the narrative, drawing readers into the world and enhancing the emotional resonance.

The pacing of this comic book is another challenge this comic book faces in my opinion, as the story moves predictably through key plot points without allowing sufficient time for development or reflection. This rapid progression makes it difficult for me personally to become invested in the characters’ journeys or the stakes of the narrative.

Despite these shortcomings, the concept behind this comic book remains promising. With a focus on romance, self-discovery, and societal expectations, it has the potential to resonate with me personally.

I Give This Book 2 / 5

“The Forgotten Gallo Bride Vol. 1” By Yuriko Matsukawa & Natalie Anderson Review

Tomas Gallo! Zara’s heart trembles as she is reunited with her ex-husband. After her parents passed away, Zara’s uncle used her as a servant until Tomas married her to free her from her uncle’s grasp. Zara still remembers their passionate kiss from that night. But it’s been two years since they’ve seen each other and it seems Tomas has completely forgotten her. Zara can’t help but return to Tomas’s side when she hears he’s recovering from an accident. But…how can this be? Has he lost his memory?

This comic book sets out to deliver an emotional tale of romance and personal discovery but ultimately falls short. Despite the potential this comic book had for compelling drama and character development, this comic book struggles with pacing and depth.

The story in this comic book centers around a woman who finds herself entangled in a complex relationship with a wealthy and enigmatic man. The premise holds promise, offering opportunities to explore themes of love, betrayal, and redemption. However, the execution lacks the nuance and emotional resonance needed to engage me personally fully.

The character development is one of the primary areas where this comic book falters in my opinion. The protagonist, while initially intriguing, remains underdeveloped. Her motivations and inner conflicts are not adequately explored, making it difficult for me personally to form a strong connection with her journey. Similarly, the male lead lacks depth, often coming across as a stereotypical romantic interest without the complexity or charm needed to captivate.

The dialogues throughout this comic book is straightforward but lacks the emotional depth necessary to elevate the narrative. Conversations between characters often feel forced or rushed, missing opportunities to delve into meaningful exchanges that could enhance the story. This results in a monotonous reading experience, with few moments that stand out or leave a lasting impression.

The artwork itself in this comic book, though competent, does little to enrich the storytelling. The illustrations lack the dynamic energy required to convey the emotional highs and lows of the narrative. Backgrounds are minimal, and the character designs, while visually appealing, do not compensate for the lack of expressiveness or detail that could elevate the story.

The use of shading and composition in the artwork is serviceable but unremarkable, failing to create an atmosphere that aligns with the romantic and dramatic themes of the story. A more dynamic visual approach could have added depth and nuance to the narrative, drawing readers into the characters’ world.

The pacing of this comic book is another challenge, as the story moves quickly through key plot points without allowing sufficient time for development or reflection. This rapid progression makes it difficult for me personally to become invested in the characters’ journeys or the stakes of the narrative.

Despite these shortcomings, the concept behind this comic book remains promising. With a focus on romance, personal growth, and overcoming challenges, it has the potential to become an engaging series. Future installments comic books in this series would benefit from more complex character development, a deeper exploration of themes, and a more engaging narrative structure.

I Give This Book 2 / 5

“An Italian Engagement Vol. 1” By Megumi Toda & Catherine George Review

Abby went to Italy to secure a contract with an opera singer for a performance in London, but her car breaks down on the way to his mountain villa. She’s saved by the singer’s mysterious, sexy half brother, Max, who happened to be passing by. Abby’s pulse races whenever she’s around him, and Max is attracted to her, too. After Abby gets the contract signed, Max, the perfect gentleman, offers to show her around town. Even after returning from Italy, Abby can’t forget his kiss…even though she knows she can’t fall in love!

This comic book attempts to weave a tale of romance and intrigue set against the beautiful backdrop of Italy. At the same time this cocoa book struggles a lot with character depth and narrative development, leaving much to be desired.

The story in this comic book follows the familiar trope of a whirlwind romance, where the protagonists are drawn together by fate and circumstance. While the setting in Italy provides a rich and romantic backdrop, the narrative fails to explore its potential fully. The initial setup promises an engaging journey, but the execution falls flat, with a plot that feels predictable and underdeveloped.

The main characters in this comic book, while initially intriguing, lack the depth and complexity needed to make their romance compelling. The protagonist’s motivations and emotions are not sufficiently explored, resulting in a character that feels more like a placeholder than a fully realized individual. Similarly, the love interest is portrayed with a lack of nuance, making it difficult for me personally to invest in their relationship.

The dialogues throughout this comic book are pretty straightforward but often lacks the emotional resonance necessary to elevate the story. The interactions between characters feel repetitive and uninspired, missing opportunities to delve into meaningful exchanges that could enhance the narrative. This results in a monotonous reading experience, with few moments that stand out or leave a lasting impression.

The artwork itself in this comic book provides some bright spots, capturing the beauty of the Italian setting with expressive illustrations. The character designs are visually appealing, and this comic books ability to convey emotion through art adds a layer of depth to the storytelling. However, the artwork alone cannot compensate for the narrative’s shortcomings.

The use of shading and composition in the artwork helps to create an atmosphere that aligns with the romantic themes, but the overall visual presentation could benefit from more dynamic panel layouts and detailed backgrounds to enhance the storytelling.

One of the main challenges I personally had with this comic book is its inability to break free from romance genre clichés. The story adheres too closely to familiar tropes without offering a fresh perspective or innovative twists. This lack of originality makes it difficult for me personally to remain interested in this comic book.

I Give This Book 2 / 5

“Prince Caspian” By C.S. Lewis Review

A prince denied his rightful throne gathers an army in a desperate attempt to rid his land of a false king. But in the end, it is a battle of honor between two men alone that will decide the fate of an entire world.

This book is the 4th book in the “The Chronicles of Narnia” series. This book continues to explore themes of courage and faith which is pretty important topic in the magical land of Narnia. But I gotta admit here that maybe this series isn’t for me personally since I really cant get into the plot of this series or even how Narnia works. But as always I will explain everything in this review, so if you are interested in hearing my thoughts about this book, then by all means keep reading this review, my dear reader.

This book begins with the Pevensie siblings (which of course are Peter, Susan, Edmund, and Lucy) who unexpectedly returning to Narnia, only to find that centuries have passed and the once-vibrant land is now under the oppressive rule of the Telmarines. The rightful heir, Prince Caspian, is in hiding, gathering an army to reclaim his throne and restore Narnia to its former glory.

I personally had a really hard time getting into the plot of this book or even remembering it. Because the moment I finished reading this book my brain have immediately erased my memory of the plot of this book. Thats because nothing really happens in this book, the whole book is just talking about the Pevensie siblings returning to Narnia and going back to the real world after some time. All the action which takes place in this book is in a form of short flashbacks.

The depiction of Narnia remains enchanting, with lush landscapes and mythical creatures. However, the setting feels somewhat underutilized in this book. The grandeur of Narnia is overshadowed by the focus on battles and strategy, which may detract from the magical atmosphere that defines the series. 

The Pevensie siblings return in this book as again central characters, but their development feels limited in this book. While their courage and leadership are evident, their personal growth is not as deeply explored as in earlier books in this series. The narrative often relies on their established traits, missing opportunities to delve into their evolving dynamics and individual challenges.

Prince Caspian, the titular character in this book, is introduced as a young leader with a noble heart. However, his character development feels rushed, and his journey lacks the depth needed to engage me personally fully. His transformation from a hesitant prince to a determined leader is outlined but not deeply explored, leaving his character somewhat underdeveloped.

When it comes to Reepicheep, the valiant mouse, stands out as a highlight, adding charm and humor to the story. His bravery and loyalty provide memorable moments, though they are not enough to carry the entire narrative.

In my opinion the Pevensie siblings and Prince Caspian feel very shallow, because the small amount of personalities they got to them in this book almost never shines through which gave me pretty hard time liking the characters or carrying about them in this book. Because they all seemed like the same character to me in this book.

The writing itself in this book retains its lyrical quality, capturing the essence of Narnia’s enchantment. The author uses the writing style to paint a vivid and evocative, painting a picture of a world filled with wonder. However, the pacing of the narrative is uneven, with long stretches of exposition and dialogue that slow down the plot. Which made it harder for me personally to actually have some kind of interested in this book. 

The story’s structure, with its focus on battles and strategy, may feel repetitive and drawn out. This can detract from the overall engagement, which has left me personally eager for more dynamic and varied storytelling.

I Give This Book 2 / 5