Takumi Satsuki (Early 20s, Male – Female in-game) became friends with Goro-san (Male) on Dragon Quest X, and they decide to become roommates. When he goes to meet up with Goro-san though, who he finds standing there is someone who doesn’t resemble their character in game one bit—a gyaru…?! This unintentionally catfished couple has a lot in store for them in this fun romantic comedy!

This comic book introduces a premise with potential but ultimately falls short in execution. At the same time the story in this comic book aims to blend comedy and slice-of-life elements but struggles with depth and engagement.

The narrative in this comic book revolves around the unlikely pairing of the protagonist with a gamer girl, exploring the dynamics of their cohabitation. While the setup promises humor and relatable scenarios, the plot lacks direction and cohesion. The story often feels like a collection of loosely connected scenes rather than a unified narrative, making it challenging for me personally to become fully invested.

The character development is a significant weakness in this comic book. The protagonist and the gamer girl are introduced with minimal depth, and their personalities remain largely unexplored. Their interactions, while occasionally amusing, lack the emotional weight and complexity needed to create meaningful character arcs. This superficial treatment had left me wanting more substance and understanding of their motivations.

The writing style in this comic book introduces scenarios that could have been rich with comedic potential, but the humor often falls flat. The dialogues are serviceable but lacks the wit and charm necessary to elevate the comedic elements. Conversations serve more as exposition than genuine exchanges, which detracts from the potential for dynamic character interactions.

The artwork in this comic book is visually appealing, with expressive character designs and detailed backgrounds that capture the everyday setting. While the visuals add an element of charm, they cannot fully compensate for the narrative shortcomings. The artwork supports the story but does not enhance the overall impact due to the lack of narrative depth.

The pacing of this comic book is inconsistent, with scenes that either drag without adding value or rush through potentially significant moments. This inconsistency disrupts the flow of the story, making it difficult for me personality to maintain interest or fully grasp the plot’s progression.

Despite its weaknesses, the concept of exploring the dynamics between a non-gamer and a gamer holds potential for future development. With a stronger narrative structure and deeper exploration of character motivations, subsequent installments could better capture the humor and relatability inherent in the premise.

I Give This Book 2 / 5