It’s the return of series creator Ben Dunn to NHS! But is it the same NHS? Fast-forward a few years and enter the world of Ricky Feeple. He’s just trying to get by at Quagmire High School, but who can study when your girlfriend’s a super hero… a female ninja wants to fight you to the death… and an alien lives in your spare bedroom!? It’s a whole new cast of characters along with plenty of the old favorites, ready to delight longtime fans and new readers alike – and all in full color!

This comic book aims to capture the charm and humor of its quirky premise but unfortunately falls short. Despite the potential which this comic book had for a fun, engaging narrative, it struggles with coherence, character development, and overall execution.

The story in this comic book is set in the unique world of Quagmire High School, where ninjas, aliens, and other fantastical elements coexist. While the premise offers ample opportunity for creativity and excitement, the plot quickly becomes muddled. The narrative lacks a clear direction, jumping from scene to scene without a cohesive storyline which have left me feeling lost and disconnected from the characters.

The character development is notably lacking in this comic book. The protagonist and supporting cast are introduced with little depth or motivation, making it difficult for me personally to connect with or care about their journeys. The lack of clear character arcs or relatable traits further detracts from the potential engagement with the story.

The writing style in this comic book fails to capture the humor and charm that the series is known for. The dialogues in this comic book often feels forced and lacks the wit needed to elevate the comedic elements. Conversations serve more as filler than genuine interactions, which detracts from the potential for dynamic character exchanges and meaningful development.

The artwork in this comic book while reminiscent of classic manga-inspired styles, does little to enhance the narrative experience. The illustrations often lack detail and consistency, failing to convey the energy and vibrancy that the story demands. The visual style feels dated and does not engage picky readers as myself, further diminishing the impact of the narrative.

The pacing in this comic book is another significant problem I had with this comic book. Because this comic book has scenes that either drag without purpose or rush through potentially important moments. This inconsistency disrupts the flow and makes it challenging for me personally to maintain interest or fully grasp the plot’s progression. The lack of a clear narrative arc further exacerbates this problem.

Despite its shortcomings, the concept this comic book had of a high school filled with ninjas and other fantastical elements holds potential for future development. With a more structured storyline and deeper exploration of character motivations, subsequent issues could better capture the fun and excitement inherent in the premise.

I Give This Book 1 / 5