Meet Sasaki, an overworked, middle-aged office worker. His days are marked only by the passing of more unrewarding corporate drudgery. Smoking helps take the edge off, but other than that, the only bright spot of his day is when he goes to the nearby supermarket and sees Yamada’s smiling face. So, one evening after yet another exhausting day, he heads to the supermarket to find he missed Yamada’s shift. Dejected, he decides to go find a smoking area but discovers there isn’t one to be found. Just as he’s about to leave, a girl in a biker jacket named Tayama asks him to join her at a secret smoking area!

This comic book aims to explore themes of nostalgia and connection in a mundane setting, but unfortunately, it falls short of delivering a compelling narrative. Despite having an intriguing premise that could delve into introspective storytelling, the execution lacks depth and fails to engage me personally.

The story in this comic book centers around a chance encounter behind a supermarket, where the protagonist frequently meets an enigmatic companion. The creators of this comic book attempts to create a slice-of-life narrative that captures the quiet moments and unspoken bonds formed in everyday life. However, the plot feels stagnant and fails to develop the characters or their relationships in a meaningful way. The lack of progression leaves the narrative feeling empty and repetitive.

The character development is notably lacking in this comic book. The protagonist and their companion are introduced with minimal background or personality, making it difficult for me personally to connect with their experiences. Their interactions, intended to be intimate and revealing, often come across as superficial and bored. This lack of depth makes it challenging for me to invest emotionally in their story.

The artwork in this comic book, while competent, does little to elevate the narrative. The illustrations capture the setting with a straightforward style, but the lack of dynamic expression and creativity in the art fails to add any significant emotional weight to the story. The visual presentation is serviceable but lacks the distinctiveness needed to enhance the narrative’s themes or mood.

One of the primary issues I had with this comic book is its pacing. The story moves slowly without building tension or interest, resulting in a narrative that feels tedious and meandering. The absence of a clear direction or purpose in the plot contributes to a sense of aimlessness, making it difficult for me personally to remain engaged or find value in the story.

The dialogues in this comic book are minimal and lacks the depth needed to develop the characters or advance the plot effectively. Conversations between the protagonist and their companion are often mundane and fail to reveal any significant insights or emotions. This lack of engaging dialogue further detracts from the overall impact of the story.

I Give This Book 1 / 5