Preface The Power Project The Furies was the first manga I ever made with my brother. The fledging manga was begot in High School. When my skills became good enough, I started it again using better paper. Each page took a single week. In time, I was able to complete a page a day. We have been toying with the idea of having it published. Recently, we got around to it. The story is about a Sumerian magic user who happens to be named Gilgamesh, who happens to have a friend named Enkiku. 

This comic book sets out to deliver a gripping tale of revenge and mythological intrigue but unfortunately falls short. Despite this comic book’s intriguing premise it struggles a lot with narrative coherence, character development, and overall execution.

The story in this comic book attempts to weave together elements of mythology and modern-day drama, following a group of characters as they seek vengeance. While the concept holds potential for a captivating narrative, the plot quickly becomes convoluted and lacks a clear direction. Scenes feel disjointed, with transitions that disrupt the flow and make it difficult for me personally to engage with the story.

The character development is notably lacking in this comic book. The protagonists, who should drive the narrative with their motivations and conflicts, are presented with minimal depth. Their personalities and backstories are not adequately explored, resulting in characters that feel flat and unrelatable. Without meaningful character arcs or emotional stakes, it’s challenging for me personally to connect with or care about their journeys.

The writing in this comic book while aiming to capture a sense of epic drama, often falls flat. The dialogue lacks the sharpness and emotional resonance needed to elevate the story, resulting in interactions that feel forced and uninspired. This diminishes the potential for dynamic exchanges and meaningful character development, had left me feeling disconnected from the characters’ experiences.

The artwork in this comic book, while attempting to capture the mythological elements of the story, does little to enhance the overall reading experience. The illustrations in this comic book often lack detail and vibrancy, failing to convey the intensity and grandeur that the narrative demands. The visual style feels underdeveloped and doesn’t fully engage me personally, further diminishing the impact of the story.

The pacing of this comic book is another significant issue I had with this comic book. Because this comic book had scenes either drag without adding value or rush through potentially important moments. This inconsistency disrupts the flow and makes it challenging for me and probably other picky readers as myself to maintain interest or fully grasp the plot’s progression. The lack of a clear narrative arc further exacerbates this problem, had left me without a satisfying sense of direction or resolution.

I Give This Book 1 / 5