A fantastic ninja comedy!! Beni doesn’t care whether she lives or dies until one day a hero appears before her very eyes. And this hero, who swears his undying loyalty to her turns out to be none other than…a ninja from the past?!

This comic book introduces an intriguing premise of time travel and romance but ultimately falls short in execution. At the same time this comic book hints at potential with its unique blend of historical and modern elements but struggles with character development and narrative cohesion.

The story in this comic book revolves around a time-traveling ninja, Kagetora, who ends up in the modern world and meets Beni, a spirited young girl. While the concept promises action and romance, the narrative in this sampler feels disjointed, with rapid shifts that make it difficult to follow. Key plot points are introduced without sufficient context, which has left me personally confused rather than intrigued.

The character development in this comic book is very minimal. Kagetora, though positioned as a noble and skilled warrior, lacks depth and relatability. His motivations and backstory are not adequately explored, making it hard for me personally to invest in his journey. Similarly, Beni’s character is underdeveloped, with her personality and history only superficially touched upon.

The interactions between Kagetora and Beni, which should be the heart of the story, lack emotional resonance. Their relationship is not given enough space to evolve naturally, resulting in a dynamic that feels forced rather than genuine. This lack of chemistry undermines the romantic aspect of the story, which is crucial to its appeal.

The artwork itself in this comic book is a redeeming feature of this comic book, because it is capturing the characters and settings with a clean and expressive style. The illustrations convey the contrast between historical and modern settings effectively, adding visual interest to the narrative. However, while the art is appealing, it cannot fully compensate for the lack of depth in the storytelling.

The pacing of this comic book is pretty uneven, with scenes that either linger without purpose or rush through potentially engaging moments. This inconsistency affects the overall flow, preventing the narrative from building tension or momentum. Key transitions are abrupt, making it challenging for me personally to stay engaged with the story.

Despite its shortcomings, this comic book does offer glimpses of potential. The concept of a time-traveling ninja in a modern setting is intriguing and holds promise for creativity. With more focused storytelling and robust character exploration, the series could capitalize on its unique premise and deliver a more satisfying narrative.

I Give This Book 2 / 5