I have been in love with my sister’s fiance for 7 years . I live a lie. That has never changed and never will. Or so I thought… Until I met Eichi. The day Eichi found out about my lie， that I was okay with my sister being with her husband， he told me that he wanted my sister for himself. We decided to work together to make our fantasy a reality. But， the way Eichi was coming on to me made me question if it was really my sister he was after. To grow accustomed to a man’s touch， he hugged me… and even k-kissed me?! What in the world is going on?

This comic book tries to weave a narrative of intrigue and personal discovery. Unfortunately, despite an interesting premise, it struggles in execution.

The story in this comic book revolves around a protagonist caught in a web of lies and deception. As the narrative unfolds, the main character grapples with secrets that threaten to unravel their life. At the same time this comic book aims to explore themes of truth, identity, and the consequences of deception.

While the setup holds potential for a compelling story, the plot quickly becomes convoluted and lacks coherence. The narrative is riddled with inconsistencies, and the progression feels disjointed, making it difficult for me personally to follow the storyline or care about the outcomes.

The character development in this comic book is one of the weakest aspects of this comic book. The protagonist, who should serve as the anchor of the story, is portrayed with little depth or complexity. Their motivations remain unclear, and their personal growth is inadequately explored throughout the narrative.

Supporting characters fare no better, often serving as mere plot devices rather than fully realized individuals. Their interactions with the protagonist lack authenticity, and their roles in the story are underdeveloped, making it challenging for me personally to connect with them on any meaningful level.

The relationships between characters, which could have added emotional depth to the narrative, feel forced and unconvincing. This lack of genuine connection further detracts from the overall impact of the story.

This comic book tries to delve into themes of identity and the repercussions of dishonesty. However, these themes are not thoroughly examined, resulting in a superficial exploration that fails to engage me personally. The moral complexities and emotional depth that could have enriched the narrative are largely absent.

The writing itself in this comic book is straightforward but lacks the nuance and vividness needed to bring the story to life. The prose is often dry, and the dialogue stilted, making it difficult for me personally to become immersed in the narrative. The lack of descriptive detail and emotional resonance further weakens the storytelling.

The setting of this comic book is largely generic, lacking the detail and atmosphere necessary to create an immersive reading experience. The potential to explore a unique backdrop that complements the themes and plot is not fully realized. Instead, the environments feel flat and uninspired, serving only as a vague backdrop to the unfolding events.

The world-building aspect of this comic book is very minimal, with little effort made to establish a sense of place or context. This lack of depth and detail in the setting further detracts from the overall narrative, which has left me personally with little to engage with beyond the surface-level plot.

This comic book faces several significant challenges that hinder its success. The plot, while initially intriguing, quickly becomes muddled and lacks focus. The attempt to weave together multiple subplots and themes results in a narrative that feels fragmented and incoherent.

Character motivations and relationships in this comic book are poorly defined, making it difficult for me personally to empathize with their struggles and desires. The emotional connections between characters are not effectively portrayed, reducing the impact of key plot points and diminishing the overall emotional weight of the story.

Additionally, the pacing of this comic book is inconsistent, with key moments of tension and conflict either rushed or dragged out. This disrupts the narrative flow and diminishes the impact of pivotal scenes, which has left me personally feeling disconnected from the story.

I Give This Book 1 / 5