“Kamakura Monogatari #1” By RYOHEI SAIGAN Review

Kamakura Monogatari follows the mystery writer Masakazu Isshiki and his young bride, Akiko, on their heart-warming life in Kamakura–but it’s not all fun and games! Masakazu and Akiko get caught up in a series of mysterious events on right after another that require all their wits and sleuthing skills to solve. Full of mysteries and romance, this charming story was chosen as the grand prize winner in the 2015 Manga Translation Battle, and was even turned into a movie in 2017!

This comic book aims to transport us as readers to a world of mystery and intrigue, but unfortunately falls short. Despite the potential this comic book had for an engaging narrative set in the picturesque town of Kamakura, it does struggles with coherence, character development, and overall execution.

The story in this comic book attempts to blend everyday life with elements of the supernatural and the mysterious, centering on a writer who encounters various oddities in Kamakura. While this premise holds promise for unique storytelling, the plot quickly becomes disjointed and difficult to follow. The narrative lacks a clear direction, jumping from one vignette to another without establishing a cohesive storyline, leaving readers confused and disengaged.

The character development is notably lacking in this comic book. The protagonist, a writer supposedly drawn to the mysteries of Kamakura, is presented with minimal depth. His motivations and personality are not fully explored, reducing him to a passive observer rather than an active participant in the unfolding events. This superficial treatment makes it difficult for me personally to connect with or care about his journey.

The writing style in this comic book introduces elements of mystery and intrigue, but the execution is uneven. The dialogues often feels stilted and lacks the wit or charm needed to bring the characters and their interactions to life. Conversations serve more as exposition rather than meaningful exchanges, which detracts from the potential for dynamic character interactions and narrative development.

The artwork in this comic book while capturing the serene beauty of Kamakura, does little to enhance the overall reading experience. The illustrations often lack detail and vibrancy, failing to convey the atmosphere and energy that the story demands. The visual style feels dated and does not engage the picky readers as myself, further diminishing the impact of the narrative.

The pacing of this comic book is another significant issue I had with this comic book. Because this comic book have scenes that either drag without purpose or rush through potentially important moments. This inconsistency disrupts the flow and makes it challenging for me personally to maintain interest or fully grasp the plot’s progression. The lack of a clear narrative arc further exacerbates this problem, which have left me without a satisfying sense of direction.

I Give This Book 1 / 5

“Ninja High School Vol. 2 #1” By Ben Dunn & Pat Duke Review

It’s the return of series creator Ben Dunn to NHS! But is it the same NHS? Fast-forward a few years and enter the world of Ricky Feeple. He’s just trying to get by at Quagmire High School, but who can study when your girlfriend’s a super hero… a female ninja wants to fight you to the death… and an alien lives in your spare bedroom!? It’s a whole new cast of characters along with plenty of the old favorites, ready to delight longtime fans and new readers alike – and all in full color!

This comic book aims to capture the charm and humor of its quirky premise but unfortunately falls short. Despite the potential which this comic book had for a fun, engaging narrative, it struggles with coherence, character development, and overall execution.

The story in this comic book is set in the unique world of Quagmire High School, where ninjas, aliens, and other fantastical elements coexist. While the premise offers ample opportunity for creativity and excitement, the plot quickly becomes muddled. The narrative lacks a clear direction, jumping from scene to scene without a cohesive storyline which have left me feeling lost and disconnected from the characters.

The character development is notably lacking in this comic book. The protagonist and supporting cast are introduced with little depth or motivation, making it difficult for me personally to connect with or care about their journeys. The lack of clear character arcs or relatable traits further detracts from the potential engagement with the story.

The writing style in this comic book fails to capture the humor and charm that the series is known for. The dialogues in this comic book often feels forced and lacks the wit needed to elevate the comedic elements. Conversations serve more as filler than genuine interactions, which detracts from the potential for dynamic character exchanges and meaningful development.

The artwork in this comic book while reminiscent of classic manga-inspired styles, does little to enhance the narrative experience. The illustrations often lack detail and consistency, failing to convey the energy and vibrancy that the story demands. The visual style feels dated and does not engage picky readers as myself, further diminishing the impact of the narrative.

The pacing in this comic book is another significant problem I had with this comic book. Because this comic book has scenes that either drag without purpose or rush through potentially important moments. This inconsistency disrupts the flow and makes it challenging for me personally to maintain interest or fully grasp the plot’s progression. The lack of a clear narrative arc further exacerbates this problem.

Despite its shortcomings, the concept this comic book had of a high school filled with ninjas and other fantastical elements holds potential for future development. With a more structured storyline and deeper exploration of character motivations, subsequent issues could better capture the fun and excitement inherent in the premise.

I Give This Book 1 / 5

“1UP: Manga One-shot” By Iver Animation Review

The mind is central to everything we as humans do. It is an eden, one that must be kept free of monsters (Fear, Sadness, Anger and other negative emotions). But what happens when those monsters are allowed to run wild? Friends Rin, Katana and Iko find out when they play the 1UP programme for the first time in this manga one-shot.

This comic book attempts to capture the excitement of gaming culture but unfortunately falls short. Despite the potential which this comic book had for an engaging story, the one-shot struggles with execution, character development, and narrative coherence.

The premise of this comic book centers around a gamer who unexpectedly finds themselves inside a video game world. While this setup holds promise for creativity and excitement, the plot quickly becomes disjointed and lacks direction. The narrative feels rushed, with a series of events that fail to build a cohesive story, which have left me feeling confused and disconnected.

The character development is notably lacking in this comic book. The protagonist is introduced without sufficient depth or backstory, making it difficult for me personally to connect with or invest in their journey. The supporting characters, who could have added richness to the narrative, are similarly underdeveloped, serving merely as plot devices rather than integral parts of the story.

The writing style in this comic book fails to capture the essence of gaming culture, often relying on clichéd dialogue and superficial interactions. Conversations feel forced and lack the authenticity needed to bring the characters and their experiences to life. This deficiency detracts from the potential for dynamic exchanges and meaningful character growth.

The artwork in this comic book does little to enhance the reading experience. While some panels capture the vibrant energy of a video game world, the overall style lacks consistency and detail. The illustrations often feel flat and uninspired, failing to convey the excitement and immersion that the premise demands.

The pacing of this comic book is another significant problem I had with this comic book. The story moves at an uneven pace, with scenes that either drag without purpose or rush through potentially important moments. This inconsistency disrupts the flow and makes it challenging for me personally to maintain interest or fully grasp the plot’s progression.

Despite its shortcomings the concept in this comic book of blending gaming elements with a narrative holds potential for future exploration. With a more structured storyline and deeper character development, subsequent works could better capture the thrill and complexity of gaming culture.

I Give This Book 1 / 5

“Street Fighter Vol. 2: Introduction” By Ken Siu-Chong Review

Introduction to Street Fighter Vol. 2: Based on the most popular fighting game ever – Street Fighter! Featuring the beginning of Ryu’s journey around the world, Cammy’s quest to discover her past, Chun-Li’s investigation into the Shadaloo-controlled Hong Kong underworld, and the first appearance of fan-favorite characters like Adon and Fei Long, this is a story no Street Fighter fan should be without!

Let me start this review by saying that this one is just a preview for the entire comic book. And I read it because I wanted to see if the full comic book was worth the money and time I would spend on it. And im gonna give you the answer for that at the end of this review.

This preview attempts to capture the excitement of the classic video game series but unfortunately falls short. Despite the rich potential of the Street Fighter universe, this preview struggles with narrative coherence, character development, and engaging artwork.

The storyline in this preview which should be driven by the vibrant energy of the games, is instead plagued by disjointed events and a lack of clear direction. The narrative feels like a series of loosely connected scenes rather than a cohesive plot, making it difficult for me personally to become invested in the characters or their journeys. This lack of structure severely undermines the potential for an engaging story.

The character development is notably lacking in this preview. Iconic figures like Ryu, Chun-Li, and Ken are presented without depth or nuance, reducing them to mere caricatures. The opportunity to explore their motivations, backstories, and relationships is largely missed, resulting in a superficial treatment that fails to resonate with me and possible with other picky readers as myself. This lack of depth makes it challenging to care about their struggles or triumphs.

The writing style in this preview does little to elevate the material. The dialogue often feels stilted and serves more as exposition than genuine interaction. This approach detracts from the potential for dynamic exchanges between characters and fails to capture the intricate relationships and rivalries that are central to the Street Fighter universe. The writing lacks the wit and intensity needed to bring these iconic characters to life.

Even the artwork in this preview which is crucial for capturing the dynamic action of Street Fighter, falls short. The illustrations lack the energy and fluidity that fans expect, with action sequences that feel static and uninspired. The visual style does not effectively convey the intensity and excitement of the battles, which is a critical element of the franchise’s appeal.

The pacing in this preview is another problem which this preview has to face. The story moves at an uneven pace, with scenes that either drag without adding value or rush through potentially significant moments. This inconsistency disrupts the flow and makes it difficult for me personally to maintain interest or fully grasp the plot’s progression.

So will I buy and read the full version of this comic book ? I don’t think I will. The main reason behind this is how poorly this preview was very uninteresting for me personally.

I Give This Book 1 / 5

“Street Fighter IV Vol. 1: Wages of Sin – Introduction” By Ken Siu-Chong Review

Introduction to Street Fighter IV Vol. 1: Wages of Collects the original Street Fighter IV #1-4: UDON’s Street Fighter IV comics are now available!! Newcomers like Crimson Viper, Rufus, Abel, and Seth battle fan-favorite characters including Sakura, Dan, Akuma, and more!

Let me start this review by saying that this one is just a preview for the entire comic book. And I read it because I wanted to see if the full comic book was worth the money and time I would spend on it. And im gonna give you the answer for that at the end of this review.

This preview aims to capture the vibrant energy of the beloved video game franchise but unfortunately falls short. Despite the rich lore and dynamic characters of Street Fighter, this preview struggles with narrative coherence and character depth.

The story in this preview attempts to weave together various plotlines involving iconic fighters like Ryu, Chun-Li, and Ken. However, the narrative feels disjointed and lacks a clear direction. Instead of a cohesive storyline, readers are presented with a series of loosely connected events that fail to build meaningful tension or engagement. This lack of structure makes it difficult to become invested in the characters or their journeys.

The character development is one of the major shortcomings of this preview. While the Street Fighter series is known for its diverse and intriguing characters, this adaptation offers little in terms of personality or growth. Iconic figures are reduced to mere caricatures, with limited exploration of their motivations or backstories. This superficial treatment significantly undermines the potential for a rich, character-driven narrative.

The writing style in this preview lacks the depth and nuance needed to bring the Street Fighter universe to life. The dialogue is often stilted and serves more as exposition than genuine interaction, which detracts from the potential for dynamic character exchanges. The opportunity to delve into the intricate relationships and rivalries between fighters is largely missed.

The artwork crucial component for capturing the dynamic action of Street Fighter, falls short in this preview. The illustrations lack the energy and fluidity that fans of the franchise expect, with action sequences that feel static and uninspired. The visual style fails to convey the intensity and excitement of the fights, which is a critical aspect of the Street Fighter experience.

Pacing is another significant problem this preview has to face. The story moves at an uneven pace, with scenes that either drag without adding value or rush through potentially significant moments. This inconsistency disrupts the flow and makes it challenging for me personally to maintain interest or fully grasp the plot’s progression.

So will I buy and read the full version of this comic book ? I don’t think I will. The main reason behind this is how poorly this preview was very uninteresting for me personally.

I Give This Book 1 / 5

“Street Fighter II Turbo Vol. 1: Introduction” By Ken Siu-Chong Review

Introduction to Street Fighter II Turbo Vol. 1: A new tournament begins! The fighters begin to gather as Chun-Li, Ryu and Ken receive invitations to the fight, while Shadaloo gathers their forces, teaming up Bison, Sagat, Vega and Balrog in an action-packed series!

Let me start this review by saying that this one is just a preview for the entire comic book. And I read it because I wanted to see if the full comic book was worth the money and time I would spend on it. And I’m gonna give you the answer for that at the end of this review.

This preview attempts to capture the excitement of the iconic video game series but falls short in delivering a compelling narrative. Despite the rich source material, the volume struggles with character development, plot cohesion, and overall engagement.

The story in this preview aims to bring the intense battles and diverse characters of Street Fighter to life. However, the plot lacks focus and direction, feeling more like a collection of loosely connected fights rather than a cohesive storyline. This lack of narrative structure makes it difficult for me personally to become invested in the characters or their journeys.

The character development is notably weak in this preview. The beloved fighters from the Street Fighter universe are presented with minimal depth and personality. Iconic characters like Ryu, Chun-Li, and Ken are given little backstory or motivation, reducing them to mere caricatures of their video game counterparts. Without meaningful exploration of their personalities or goals, the characters fail to resonate with me and possibly with other readers like myself who are very picky readers.

The writing style in this preview introduces numerous characters and battles, but the dialogue often feels stilted and lacks the emotional weight needed to elevate the stakes. Conversations serve more as exposition than genuine interactions, leaving the characters feeling flat and unengaging. The potential for exploring the rich dynamics between fighters is largely missed.

The artwork in this preview, while capturing the action and style of the games, cannot fully compensate for the narrative shortcomings. The illustrations depict the characters and their signature moves with accuracy, but the visual storytelling does little to enhance the plot or character arcs. The lack of dynamic and detailed backgrounds also detracts from the overall visual appeal.

The pacing is another significant issue which this preview faces. The story rushes through key events without providing sufficient context or buildup, making the transitions between scenes feel abrupt and disjointed. This inconsistency disrupts the flow, making it challenging for me to maintain interest or fully grasp the plot’s progression.

So will I buy and read the full version of this comic book ? I don’t think I will. The main reason behind this is how poorly this preview was very uninteresting for me personally.

I Give This Book 1 / 5

“Street Fighter Legends: Chun-Li Vol. 2: Introduction” By Ken Siu-Chong & Erik Ko & Omar Dogan Review

Introduction to Street Fighter Chun-Li Vol. 2: She’s been nicknamed “The Strongest Woman in the World,” but before Chun-Li was a no-nonsense Interpol officer she was a fresh recruit in the Hong Kong Police. Street Fighter Chun-Li explores Street Fighter history and the young Chun-Li’s first encounter with the criminal Shadaloo organization. With her partner Po-Lin and her father (and superior officer) Dorai by her side, expect this trio to get into car chases, shoot outs, and plenty of fisticuffs as they fight their way to the truth about Shadaloo’s latest scheme. Plus appearances by Dan, Gen, Fei Long, Sagat, and more Street Fighter favorites!

Let me start this review by saying that this one is just a preview for the entire comic book. And I read it because I wanted to see if the full comic book was worth the money and time I would spend on it. And I’m gonna give you the answer for that at the end of this review.

This preview struggles to capture the excitement and depth fans expect from the beloved franchise. Despite the potential of focusing on one of Street Fighter’s iconic characters, this preview fails to deliver a compelling narrative or meaningful character development.

The story in this preview aims to delve deeper into Chun-Li’s backstory, exploring her motivations and challenges. However, the plot is thin and lacks direction, making it difficult for readers to engage with the narrative. The storyline feels more like a series of disconnected events rather than a cohesive arc, which have left me unsatisfied and disconnected from the character’s journey.

The character development is a significant weakness in this preview. Chun-Li, a character known for her strength and complexity, is presented here with little depth. Her motivations are unexplored, and her interactions with other characters lack the emotional weight needed to make them impactful. This superficial treatment of such a central character is disappointing and undermines the potential for a rich, character-driven story.

The side characters in this preview also suffers from minimal development. Characters are introduced without much context or backstory, making them feel like mere plot devices rather than integral parts of the narrative. This lack of depth in both the protagonist and supporting characters results in a story that feels flat and uninspired.

While the artwork in this preview is visually pleasing, it cannot fully compensate for the shortcomings in the narrative. The illustrations capture the energy and style of the Street Fighter universe, with dynamic action sequences and vibrant character designs. However, even strong visuals cannot elevate the overall reading experience when the story lacks substance and cohesion.

The pacing of this preview is another issue this preview has to face. Because with  scenes that either drag without adding value or rush through potentially significant moments. This inconsistency disrupts the flow of the narrative, making it challenging for me personally to maintain interest or fully grasp the plot’s progression.

The dialogues throughout this preview tends to be stilted and lacks the sharpness needed to bring the characters to life. Conversations often serve as exposition rather than meaningful exchanges, further detracting from the potential for character development and engagement.

Despite its shortcomings of this preview, the concept of focusing on Chun-Li’s story holds potential for the full version of this comic book. With a more focused narrative and deeper exploration of character motivations, the series could better capture the essence of the Street Fighter universe and offer a more rewarding experience for fans.

So will I buy and read the full version of this comic book ? I don’t think I will. The main reason behind this is how poorly this preview was very uninteresting for me personally.

I Give This Book 1 / 5

“I’m Happily Married to a Lord with the Worst Reputation #001” By Ryo Aduchi Review

Diana is the daughter of a baron. Her parents have doted on her half-sister so much, that she has grown to be extremely selfish, even stealing away Diana’s fiancé! After being made a laughing stock of high society, Diana is forced to marry the brutal and ruthless Margrave Wolfgang. However, the man isn’t quite what rumors make him out to be.

This comic book sets out to explore an intriguing premise but unfortunately falls short in its execution. Despite the potential for drama and romance, this comic book struggles with storytelling, character development, and engagement.

The narrative in this comic book centers on a protagonist who finds herself married to a notorious lord, offering a setup ripe for tension and intrigue. However, the plot is thin and lacks direction, failing to make the most of its promising concept. The storyline feels more like a series of disconnected events rather than a cohesive narrative. Which have left me feeling that this comic book had no solid foundation to become invested in.

The character development is particularly lacking in this comic book. The protagonist is portrayed with minimal depth, making it difficult for me personally to connect with her journey. Her motivations and personality are underexplored, reducing her to a passive figure in a story that should revolve around her experiences. Similarly, the lord with the “worst reputation” is not given enough complexity or background, making him more of a caricature than a compelling character.

The writing style in this comic book introduces elements that could have been rich with dramatic potential, but the execution is uneven. The dialogues often feels forced and lacks the emotional weight needed to elevate the stakes. Conversations serve more as exposition rather than meaningful interactions, which detracts from the potential for dynamic character exchanges and development.

The artwork in this comic book while competent, does little to enhance the narrative experience. The illustrations capture the historical setting with some charm, but they do not compensate for the story’s lack of depth. The visual style supports the setting but fails to add any significant impact due to the weak narrative foundation.

The pacing of this comic book is another issue it has to face. Since the scenes in this comic book either drag without purpose or rush through potentially important moments. This inconsistency disrupts the overall flow, which made it challenging for me personally to maintain interest or fully grasp the plot’s progression. The lack of a clear narrative arc further exacerbates this problem.

Despite these shortcomings, the concept which this comic book has of a marriage between an ordinary protagonist and a notorious lord holds potential for future development. With stronger narrative structure and deeper exploration of character motivations, subsequent installments could better capture the drama and romance inherent in the premise.

I Give This Book 1 / 5

“Nutmeg Vol. 1: Early Fall- Taste Buddies: Introduction” By James F. Wright & Jackie Crofts Review

Vol. 1 “Early Taste Buddies” collects issues 1-3 of Nutmeg, following 8th-grader Poppy Pepper’s partnership with new girl Cassia Caraway and their plan to sabotage rich girl rival Saffron Longfellow’s brownie fundraiser, taking their first steps toward a life of crime.

Let me start this review by saying that this one is just a preview for the entire comic book. And I read it because I wanted to see if the full comic book was worth the money and time I would spend on it. And I’m gonna give you the answer for that at the end of this review.

This preview gives us a story with an intriguing premise but falls short in execution. At the same time this preview attempts to blend elements of mystery and coming-of-age drama but struggles to find a compelling balance.

The narrative of this preview follows two middle school girls, Cassia and Poppy, who embark on an unconventional culinary adventure that quickly spirals into a brewing mystery. While the setup promises a quirky and engaging tale, the plot unfolds with a lack of focus and clarity. The storytelling feels disjointed, making it difficult for me personally grasp the stakes or become invested in the outcome.

The character development in this preview is notably lacking in this volume. Cassia and Poppy, the protagonists, are introduced with minimal depth, and their motivations remain unclear throughout the story. Their friendship, which should serve as a central pillar of the narrative, is not explored with enough depth to make it relatable or engaging. As a result, the characters feel more like archetypes than fully realized individuals.

The side characters in this preview also suffers from a lack of development. Secondary characters are introduced without much context or backstory, leaving them flat and unmemorable. This lack of character depth results in a story that lacks the emotional resonance needed to capture my interest. 

The artwork is one of the few redeeming aspects of this preview. The illustrations are colorful and stylized, effectively capturing the whimsical tone that the narrative aims for. However, even strong artwork cannot fully compensate for the weaknesses in plot and character development.

The pacing of this preview is another area of concern. The story moves at an uneven pace, with certain scenes dragging on without contributing significantly to character development or plot progression. At the same time, key moments that should be impactful are rushed, undermining their potential emotional weight.

The dialogues throughout this preview feels stilted and lacks the natural flow needed to bring the characters to life. Conversations often serve more as exposition rather than meaningful exchanges, which detracts from the overall engagement and fails to build the necessary intrigue or tension.

So will I buy and read the full version of this comic book ? I don’t think I will. The main reason behind this is how poorly this preview was very uninteresting for me personally.

I Give This Book 1 / 5

“You’re Not Supposed to Die Tonight” By Kalynn Bayron Review

Charity Curtis has the summer job of her dreams, playing the “final girl” at Camp Mirror Lake. Guests pay to be scared in this full-contact terror game, as Charity and her summer crew recreate scenes from a classic slasher film, Curse of Camp Mirror Lake. The more realistic the fear, the better for business. But the last weekend of the season, Charity’s co-workers begin disappearing. And when one ends up dead, Charity’s role as the final girl suddenly becomes all too real. If Charity and her girlfriend Bezi hope to survive the night, they’ll need figure out what this killer is after. Is there is more to the story of Mirror Lake and its dangerous past than Charity ever suspected?

The reason why I read this book is because I’ve heard a lot of good things about this book and I have already read 2 books by the author which I had really liked. But after trying to read this book I gotta admit that this book was very painfully cringey to read and I just needed to DNF this book or I would never pick up any other book if I had completed this book.

The plot of this book is very slow and I just couldn’t find anything in the plot which would interested me enough to keep reading. The first 50 or so pages of this book is just scenes skipping between each other and the councilors talking about the final slasher simulation of the summer. Which really made me bored and uninterested because the plot in the first half was just the councilors walking around the property, talking and checking on props they were using in their simulation.

The plot would also gives us the glimpses of the woke political views, like police not carrying about black people and only being concerned about the safety of white people. Which really was the final straw for me to make my mind about DNF-ing this book. Because I personally hate it when authors use their fictional books to shove their political views down the readers throats. Im completely fine with the authors having their own political views but if the author is writing a fictional book then they shouldn’t fill the book with their real life political views.

At the same time the plot in this book is so much cringey and it plays on the slasher movie theme stereotypes. Where the main character constantly says “I cant die since I’m the final girl in the simulation”. Which didn’t help me liking this book and giving this book a good review. 

The writing style in this book, honestly felt like it was generated by chatGPT or some other AI chat. Because the entire writing style in this book was like “this happened, then this happened, then that happened, and lastly this happened” which made it seem to me like it was written by AI or the author just didn’t bother with this book and she just needed a quick paycheck.

The characters in this book were very annoying and shallow. The main character in this book would constantly say “I’m black and I’m gay” which made me annoyed and frustrated because like I get it that the main character is black and gay but the author doesn’t have to rub it in and remind me of it every 2 pages or so. It was almost like the main character’s whole personality was that she was black and gay.

All the characters in this book are very shallow and have no personalities to them besides their personalities being all about their looks and their sexuality. Which made me want to buy out every copy of this book and burn them to the ground.

This book gotta be easily my most hated book I have read so far in my life and that saying something looking at the fact of how many books I have read and reviewed on this website.

I Give This Book 1 / 5