“Penelope’s Adventure Club 4” By Penelope Rivera & Josh Rivera Review

What is this “Mission” and who is “her”? Penelope’s Adventure Club 4 promises to answer these questions plus more jokes, more dabbing, and even some TikTok references!! Fun for everyone! Penelope and Josh Rivera (now 10 and 13 years old) worked on PAC 4 during the summer of 2020 (coronavirus pandemic). They made sure to answer all the questions from PAC 3 in a fun and unique way. They hope to one day have this series printed and sold at Barnes & Noble. Penelope’s dream is to be an author and hopes that this comic will make other kids laugh, happy, and entertained.In addition, Penelope and Josh would like to use these books as a vehicle to help others. In 2019 the kids donated all the sales of their eBooks to Give Kids The World in Orlando, Florida (a nonprofit resort in Central Florida that provides week-long, cost-free vacations to children with critical illnesses and their families). In 2020, because of the coronavirus, we made their ebooks free to download so that kids can have something fun to read at home during the pandemic.

This comic book aims to continue the whimsical journeys of its young protagonist, but unfortunately. Despite its potential to charm young readers, the issue struggles with repetitive storytelling and insufficient character development.

The narrative in this comic book follows Penelope and her friends on yet another adventure, but the plot feels uninspired and predictable. There is a noticeable lack of creativity and excitement in the storyline, making it difficult for me personally to engage with this comic book. The repetitive nature of the plot leaves a sense of déjà vu, as it treads the same ground as previous comic books in this series without introducing fresh challenges or imaginative twists.

Penelope, the central character, remains static, showing little growth or evolution. Her adventures lack personal stakes, making it difficult for me personally to connect with her journey on an emotional level. The supporting characters, too, are underdeveloped, functioning more as background elements rather than dynamic participants in the narrative. This lack of character depth prevents the story from resonating or leaving a lasting impact.

The dialogues throughout this comic book are pretty simplistic and lacks the wit or charm needed to elevate the narrative. Interactions between characters often feel forced and uninspired, missing opportunities to inject humor or meaningful exchanges. This results in a monotonous storytelling experience, lacking memorable moments or engaging dialogue.

The artwork itself in this comic book also falls short of its potential. The illustrations remain basic, lacking the dynamic energy needed to bring Penelope’s adventures to life. Backgrounds are sparse, and the character designs lacks expression and detail. This results in a static visual presentation that fails to draw me personally into the world of Penelope’s adventures.

One of the main challenges I personally had with this comic book is its inability to innovate or build upon previous stories. The series seems caught in a cycle of repetition, with each issue offering similar plots and character interactions. This lack of growth and creativity makes it difficult for me personally to maintain interested in this comic book or this whole series in general over time.

Despite these shortcomings, the concept behind this comic book remains promising. With a focus on adventure, friendship, and discovery, it has the potential to be an engaging series for children. However, future comic books in this series need to focus on developing richer characters, crafting more engaging plots, and enhancing the visual storytelling.

I Give This Book 1 / 5

“Penelope’s Adventure Club 5” By Penelope Rivera & Josh Rivera Review

Are you ready? All 4 comics have led to this. With Penelope mad at her brother, will the kids and clothes ever find Hat? Get ready for the longest, funniest, most action, most referenced, most detailed Adventure Club ever!Penelope and Josh Rivera (now 11 and 14 years old) worked on PAC 5 during the summer of 2021. Very cool to see how their story and drawings have evolved over the years, starting from 2018. Their goal is to one day have this series printed and sold at Barnes & Noble. Penelope’s dream is to be an author and hopes that this comic will make other kids laugh and entertained.In 2019, the kids donated all the sales of their eBooks to Give Kids The World in Orlando, Florida (a nonprofit resort in Central Florida that provides week-long, cost-free vacations to children with critical illnesses and their families).

This comic book continues the saga of Penelope and her friends. Despite the potential this comic book has for engaging storytelling, this comic book struggles with repetitive plots and underdeveloped characters, failing to capture the magic that readers might hope for.

The narrative in this comic book follows Penelope on another escapade, but the storyline feels stale and predictable. The plot lacks innovation and depth, offering little in terms of new challenges or creative twists. This results in a narrative that seems to tread familiar ground without providing the excitement and engagement necessary to captivate me personally

Penelope, the central character, remains static, showing little growth or development. Her adventures lack personal stakes or emotional resonance, making it difficult for me personally to invest in her journey. The supporting characters, too, are underutilized, serving more as background elements than dynamic participants in the story. This absence of character development prevents the narrative from resonating on a deeper level.

The dialogues throughout this comic book is straightforward but uninspired. Conversations between characters often feel forced, missing opportunities to inject humor or meaningful exchanges that could add depth to the narrative. This results in a monotonous storytelling experience, with few moments that stand out or leave a lasting impression.

The artwork in this comic book continues to fall short. The illustrations are basic and lack the dynamic energy needed to bring the adventures to life. Backgrounds are sparse, and the character designs, while colorful, lack expression and detail. This results in a static visual presentation that fails to drawn me personally into the world of Penelope’s adventures.

One of the core challenges I had with this comic book is its inability to evolve or build upon previous installments. The series seems caught in a cycle of repetition, with each issue offering similar plots and character interactions. This lack of growth and creativity makes it difficult for me personally to maintain interest in this comic book or this series over time.

Despite these shortcomings, the concept behind this comic book remains promising. With a focus on adventure, friendship, and discovery, it has the potential to be an engaging series for children. However, future comic books in this series need to focus on developing richer characters, crafting more engaging plots, and enhancing the visual storytelling.

I Give This Book 1 / 5

“Penelope’s Adventure Club 2” By Penelope Rivera & Joshua Rivera Review

Penelope and Josh are back with all new adventures! What happens when Penelope, Josh, and friends go back into the portal?? Adventure Club 2 promises to have more jokes, more action, and more dabbing!! Join the club!

This comic book attempts to continue the whimsical journey started in the first comic books in this series. At the same time this comic book struggles a lot with  repetitive storytelling and lacks the engaging elements necessary to capture my imaginations.

The story in this comic book follows Penelope and her friends as they embark on another adventure, but the narrative feels stagnant, offering little in terms of new experiences or creativity. The plot is predictable, lacking the excitement and innovation needed to make the adventure memorable. This results in a narrative that feels more like a rehash of previous stories rather than a fresh, captivating journey.

Penelope, the protagonist, remains underdeveloped. Her character shows minimal growth, making it difficult for me personally to connect with her journey. The supporting characters also lack depth, serving more as background figures than active participants in the story. This absence of character development prevents the narrative from resonating emotionally with readers.

The dialogues throughout this comic book are pretty simplistic and lacks the charm needed to elevate the story. Interactions between characters often feel forced, missing opportunities to inject humor or meaningful exchanges that could enhance the narrative. This results in a monotonous story, with little to engage me personally.

The artwork itself in this comic book continues to fall short of its potential. The illustrations are basic and lack the dynamic energy required to bring Penelope’s adventures to life. Backgrounds are sparse, and the character designs, while colorful, lack expression and detail. This results in a visual experience that feels static and uninspired.

One of the main issues I personally had with this comic book is its inability to innovate or build upon the first comic book in this series. The series seems stuck in a cycle of repetition, with each installment offering similar plots and character interactions. This lack of growth and creativity makes it difficult for me personally to maintain interest over time.

I Give This Book 1 / 5

“Grumble #1” By Rafer Roberts & Mike Norton Review

When the forces of good and evil are hunting you down, the only logical thing to do is disguise yourself as a dog and go on the run! Eddie is a low-rent hustler who got magically turned into a pug during a con gone wrong. Tala is Eddie’s long-lost, part-demon daughter. When Tala finds herself the target of powerful inter-dimensional forces, she goes to Eddie for help-setting off a chain reaction of chaos and destruction that could threaten the very fabric of existence. Can Eddie and Tala put aside their differences long enough to survive the magical mayhem and madness that they started, or will they kill each other first? (It’s probably the second one!) For readers who like it gruff and anthropomorphic, get ready for your new favorite comic!

This comic book is an engaging debut that blends humor, fantasy, and crime in a highly entertaining package. At the same time this comic book introduces us as readers to a world filled with magic, mischief, and mayhem, setting the stage for a thrilling series.

The story in this comic book centers on Eddie, a con artist with a knack for trouble, and Tala, a young woman with a mysterious past. Together, they navigate a world where magic is real and danger lurks around every corner. The creators of this comic book create a narrative that is both fast-paced and character-driven, weaving together elements of noir and fantasy with a comedic twist. The plot is cleverly constructed that have kept me personally intrigued and eager to see what unfolds next.

The character development is a standout feature in this comic book. Because Eddie is portrayed as a deeply flawed yet charismatic protagonist, whose quick wit and questionable morals make him both compelling and unpredictable. Tala, on the other hand, is a strong and enigmatic figure, whose backstory and motivations are gradually revealed, adding depth and intrigue. The dynamic between the two leads is electric, offering plenty of humor and tension as they navigate their chaotic world.

The artwork in this comic book is a perfect match for the story’s tone, bringing the characters and their fantastical surroundings to life with vivid detail and creativity. The illustrations capture the energy and humor of the narrative, with expressive character designs and dynamic action sequences. The artwork in this comic book has the ability to blend the mundane with the magical creates a visually captivating experience that enhances the storytelling.

While this comic book excels in many areas, there are moments where the pacing feels slightly uneven. The rapid-fire dialogue and quick transitions can occasionally make it challenging to fully absorb the plot’s intricacies. However, this is a minor issue in an otherwise well-crafted narrative, and the engaging characters and intriguing premise more than compensate for any pacing concerns.

The dialogues in this comic book are sharp and witty, capturing the essence of the characters and their interactions. The writing in this comic book is both entertaining and insightful, using conversations to reveal character motivations and advance the plot. The dialogue not only adds humor but also enriches the character dynamics, making them more relatable and engaging.

I Give This Book 4 / 5

“Lori Lovecraft Vol. 1: Introduction” By Pete Ventrella & Mike Vosburg Review

Giant-sized Lori Lovecraft Collection. This trade paperback collects the short Into The Past, Back To The Garden,and VooDoo Mansion. At nineteen with her innocent beauty and body to die for, Lori Lovecraft had no shortage of offers on her quest for the Hollywood dream. But at thrity, without talent or clout she’s an aging has-been and the dream is turning into a nightmare. Her last chance is DAME IN DANGER, a no budget flick by cult director Derik VonVon, who’s looking to make a comeback himself. Unfortunately for Lori and co-star Allen Roberts, VonVon and his punk rock protege Natasha Reich have more devious plans. To escape this doom Lori has to seek the strength and knowledge from the one source she’s never had herself.

Let me start this review by saying that this one is just a preview for the entire comic book. And I read it because I wanted to see if the full comic book was worth the money and time I would spend on it. And I’m gonna give you the answer for that at the end of this review.

This preview attempts to blend Hollywood glamour with supernatural intrigue, but unfortunately, it falls short in execution. Despite its intriguing premise, the comic struggles with narrative cohesion, character development, and overall engagement.

The story in this preview centers on Lori Lovecraft, a former starlet navigating a world filled with occult mysteries. While the idea of combining the glitz of Hollywood with supernatural elements is promising, the narrative lacks clarity and direction. The plot meanders without a clear focus, making it difficult for me personally to become invested in Lori’s journey or the challenges she faces.

The character development is notably weak in this preview, Lori, intended to be a charismatic and complex protagonist, comes across as one-dimensional. Her motivations are unclear, and her personality lacks depth, making it challenging for me personally to connect with her. The supporting characters fare no better, often serving as mere background figures without significant roles or development.

The artwork in this preview, while stylistically distinct, struggles to elevate the story. The illustrations capture the noir-inspired aesthetic the comic aims for, but they often lack consistency and detail. This inconsistency can make it difficult for me personally to follow the action or engage with the characters. Additionally, the art style might not appeal to everyone, as it fails to effectively convey the intended atmosphere or enhance the storytelling.

One of the primary issues I had with this preview is its pacing. The story moves erratically, with scenes that feel disjointed and transitions that lack fluidity. This uneven pacing disrupts the narrative flow, making it challenging for me personally to follow the plot or maintain interest. A more structured approach could have allowed for better exploration of the themes and characters.

The dialogues in this preview are often stilted and lacks nuance. Conversations feel forced and expository, serving more as a tool for delivering information than for developing characters or advancing the plot. More engaging and natural dialogue could have added layers to the narrative, making the characters more relatable and the story more compelling.

So will I buy and read the full version of this comic book ? I don’t think I will. The main reason behind this is how poorly this preview was very uninteresting for me personally.

I Give This Book 1 / 5

“Sidewise #1” By Dwight L. MacPherson & Igor Noronha Review

Teen genius Adam Graham borrows his parents’ time device to visit 1902 London only to find himself in an alternate universe.

This comic book introduces an ambitious concept that unfortunately falls short in execution. At the same time this comic book attempts to blend elements of science fiction and adventure, but struggles with pacing and character development.

The premise of this comic book involves a young protagonist who stumbles into a parallel world filled with alternate realities and historical twists. While this concept holds great potential for an engaging story, the narrative feels rushed and lacks clarity. The issue attempts to cover too much ground too quickly which has left me with a fragmented understanding of the plot and its intricacies.

The character development is one of the weakest aspects of this comic book. The protagonist, while initially intriguing, is not given enough depth or backstory to make them relatable or engaging. Without a clear understanding of their motivations or personality, it becomes difficult for me personally to connect with their journey. Similarly, the supporting characters are underdeveloped, serving more as plot devices than fully realized individuals.

The artwork in this comic book, while visually interesting, struggles to compensate for the narrative’s deficiencies. The illustrations capture the chaotic and surreal nature of the alternate realities, but they often lack the detail and cohesion needed to effectively convey the story. The art style, though unique, may not appeal to all readers, as it can feel inconsistent and difficult to follow.

One of the primary issues I had with this comic book is its pacing. The story moves rapidly through scenes without providing sufficient context or explanation. This hurried approach prevents the narrative from building meaningful tension or emotional impact, resulting in a disjointed and unsatisfying reading experience. A more measured pace could allow for better exploration of the characters and the intriguing worlds they inhabit.

The dialogues in this comic book are often expository, lacking the depth and nuance needed to develop character relationships or advance the plot effectively. Conversations feel forced, serving more as a means to deliver information than to engage readers or reveal character insights. More engaging dialogue could add layers to the narrative, enhancing the overall storytelling.

I Give This Book 2 / 5

“Possessions Vol. 1: Unclean Getaway Preview” By Ray Fawkes Review

10-Page Preview! Meet Gurgazon the Unclean, the cuddliest little pit demon ever trapped in the Llewellyn-Vane House for Captured Spirits and Ghostly Curiosities! This pit demon may look just like a cute little 5-year old girl, but it isn’t interested in playing checkers with other ghosts. The Gurgazon is determined to escape! Will the house contain it? Or will the world of peace and friendly bunnies come to an end as the Gurgazon exacts its revenge?

Let me start this review by saying that this one is just a preview for the entire comic book. And I read it because I wanted to see if the full comic book was worth the money and time I would spend on it. And I’m gonna give you the answer for that at the end of this review.

This preview embarks on a supernatural journey that, despite its intriguing premise, stumbles in execution. While the concept of this preview is about a young girl possessed by multiple spirits offers potential for engaging storytelling, this preview struggles to deliver a cohesive and compelling narrative.

The story in this preview introduces us to Gurgazon, a demon trapped in the body of a little girl, residing at the Llewellyn-Vane House for Captured Spirits and Ghostly Curiosities. The setting is ripe for a mix of humor and horror, but the narrative feels disjointed and lacking in depth. The plot progresses rapidly without establishing a strong foundation, which has left me with questions rather than intrigue.

The character development is minimal, with Gurgazon depicted primarily through her mischievous antics. While her rebellious nature provides some entertainment, it lacks the complexity needed to make her a fully engaging protagonist. The supporting cast, including the staff and other supernatural entities, are similarly underdeveloped, serving more as background elements than integral parts of the story.

The artwork in this preview, while stylistically distinct, does little to enhance the narrative. The illustrations capture the quirky and eerie nature of the setting, but they often appear cluttered and lack clarity. This can make it difficult for me personally to follow the action or connect with the characters. Additionally, the art style, while unique, may not appeal to everyone, potentially alienating some readers.

One significant issue I had with this preview is its pacing. The story moves quickly through key events without providing sufficient context or character exploration. This rapid progression prevents the narrative from building meaningful tension or emotional impact, resulting in a reading experience that feels superficial and unsatisfying.

The dialogues in this preview are straightforward but lacks the wit and charm needed to elevate the characters and their interactions. Conversations often feel functional rather than engaging, missing opportunities to develop character relationships or enhance the humor. More nuanced dialogue could add layers to the narrative, enriching the overall storytelling.

So will I buy and read the full version of this comic book ? I don’t think I will. The main reason behind this is how poorly this preview was very uninteresting for me personally.

I Give This Book 2 / 5

“Teen Titans Go! To Camp #4” By Sholly Fisch & Darío Brizuela Review

Beast Boy writes his stepmother, who interrupts a battle to read it aloud.

This comic book attempts to deliver the trademark humor and playful antics fans expect from the Teen Titans Go! series, but unfortunately, this comic book falls short in execution.

The story in this comic book takes the young Titans on another camp adventure, filled with potential for fun and mischief. However, the narrative feels disjointed and lacks the engaging plot that typically drives the series. The jokes, while present, often miss the mark, relying heavily on slapstick and predictable gags that fail to capture the cleverness usually associated with the franchise.

The character development is minimal in this comic book, with the Titans reduced to their most basic traits. Robin’s obsessive leadership, Beast Boy’s goofiness, and Raven’s deadpan humor are all present, but they lack the depth and nuance that make them interesting. The interactions between characters feel repetitive and uninspired, missing opportunities to explore their dynamics in new and creative ways.

The artwork in this comic book remains true to the animated style of Teen Titans Go!, with exaggerated expressions that appeal to younger audiences. However, even the vibrant visuals cannot fully compensate for the lackluster narrative. While the art captures the energy of the series, it struggles to enhance a story that feels stagnant and unoriginal.

One significant issue I had with this comic book is its pacing. Because the story jumps from scene to scene without a clear sense of direction or purpose, resulting in a fragmented narrative. This lack of cohesion makes it difficult for me personally to stay engaged or invested in the Titans’ camp antics. A more structured approach could have allowed for better comedic timing and plot development.

The dialogues in this comic book are straightforward but lacks the wit and humor that fans expect. Conversations often feel forced and lack the clever banter that typically characterizes the Titans’ interactions. More engaging dialogue could have added depth to the characters and enhanced the comedic elements of the story.

I Give This Book 2 / 5

“DC Nation (2018) #6” By Liam Sharp & Steve Oliff Review

The monthly free magazine that brings you insie info on the characters and creators of the DC Universe!

This comic book offers us a mixed collection of stories. At the same time this comic book provides a variety of narratives, showcasing different aspects of the DC Universe, but the overall impact is somewhat uneven.

Th The anthology format allows for diverse storytelling, with each piece bringing its own flavor and focus. This is comic book features a range of characters and scenarios, from iconic heroes to lesser-known figures. While this variety is one of the issue’s strengths, it also contributes to a sense of inconsistency in tone and quality

Liam Sharp’s contribution stands out for its detailed artwork and imaginative approach. His illustrations are dynamic and intricate, capturing the essence of the characters and their environments. Sharp’s ability to convey motion and emotion through his art adds depth to the narratives, making them visually engaging.

However, some stories in this comic book feel rushed or underdeveloped, which has left me wanting more depth and cohesion. The short format can be a double-edged sword, providing quick snapshots of different worlds but also limiting the potential for thorough exploration and character development. This can lead to a lack of emotional resonance, as picky readers as myself may struggle to connect with the characters or become fully invested in the plots.

The writing in this comic book varies in effectiveness. While some narratives are sharp and engaging, others rely on familiar tropes or lack the originality needed to stand out. The dialogue, though generally well-crafted, occasionally feels expository, serving more as a tool for advancing the plot than for developing character dynamics or revealing deeper themes.

One of this comic book’s highlights is its ability to introduce new readers to the expansive DC Universe. By offering a selection of stories featuring different characters and settings, it acts as a gateway for those unfamiliar with the comics. However, for seasoned fans, the lack of depth in some stories might be a drawback, as they seek more substantial narratives and character exploration.

Despite its shortcomings this comic book succeeds in showcasing the creativity and diversity of the DC Universe. The artwork, particularly Sharp’s, is a visual treat, and the variety of stories ensures there is something for every reader. This comic book’s format allows for experimentation and creativity, even if not every story hits the mark.

I Give This Book 3 / 5

“Neotopia Vol. 1 #1” By Rod Espinosa Review

Compassionate ruler Nalyn, secretly an abused servant standing in for the arrogant, conceited true princess, is kidnapped. Despite Nalyn wrecking his recent invention, Philios reluctantly leads a daring rescue mission to save her from the Krosian Emperor’s dungeons. But as they return home, a nasty surprise awaits them all.

This comic book introduces us as readers to a vibrant fantasy world. At the same time this comic book sets the groundwork for an adventurous tale, blending elements of steampunk, fantasy, and political intrigue.

The story in this comic book takes place in a richly imagined world where technology and magic coexist. The creators of this comic book create a narrative that follows Nalyn, a seemingly ordinary girl thrust into an extraordinary journey. The plot hints at deeper themes of identity, power, and responsibility, providing a promising foundation for future exploration. However, the initial setup feels somewhat rushed, with a lot of world-building packed into a short space, which can be overwhelming for some readers.

The character development in this comic book is promising but limited. Nalyn is introduced as a relatable protagonist, her curiosity and courage driving the narrative forward. While her character shows potential for growth, the issue doesn’t delve deeply into her backstory or motivations. The supporting cast, though intriguing, is not fully fleshed out, which has left me personally wanting more insight into their roles and relationships.

The artwork in this comic book is a standout feature, bringing the world of Neotopia to life with vivid detail and creativity. The illustrations are colorful and dynamic, capturing the whimsical yet intricate nature of the setting. The artwork in this comic book has the ability to blend elements of fantasy and steampunk is evident in the design of the landscapes and machinery, which add depth to the visual storytelling.

While this comic book excels in world-building and visual storytelling, it faces some challenges in pacing. The narrative moves quickly through key plot points, which can make it difficult for me personally to fully grasp the intricacies of the world and its lore. A more measured approach to pacing could allow for deeper exploration of both the characters and the setting, providing a richer narrative experience.

The dialogues in this comic book are straightforward and functional, capturing the essence of the characters and their interactions. The writing in this comic book is engaging, though it occasionally lacks the depth and nuance needed to fully develop character dynamics. More intricate dialogue could add layers to the relationships, enhancing the emotional impact of the story.

I Give This Book 3 / 5